Animation Mentor - Week 2 feedback

Got my first feedback session. Thought I'd go back over my submitted pose and incorporate the suggested improvements. This was my original:

This was the pass I did after the feedback:

 This is the two overlaid. A bit tricky to see.

Looking at it now, I don't like the position of the right hand, but I messed around with this pose so much that I managed to bust some of the controllers and their connections to everything getting increasingly difficult to move in the way it's meant to! Gotta draw a line under it and move on to this week's work.